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    The 2012 London Olympic Games. (최우수상)
    홍주형 작성일 : 2012-08-26    조회수 : 3,470     


                                                       The 2012 London Olympic Games

           The 2012 London Olympic started on July 27th, the day our family arrived home from a camping trip to Yeosu EXPO. After we arrived home, I turned on the television. The opening ceremony had just ended. I went to bed thinking about the exciting olympic games that night.
           
           During the summer vacation, I watched the Korean athletes' olympic games and cheered loudly everyday. I will introduce three most impressive olympic Korean athletes. First, I'll write about Ki Bo Bae. She is a Korean archer. She got two gold medals in this olympic. One in the women team and the other in the woman single. I saw her game on T.V.Women single archery gold medal match's shoot-off was really close. The wind was blowing hard.However,Ki Bo Bae shot eight point and she won a gold medal. I screamed with joy when she won.It is thrilling to watch the archer's arrow bounce off the bow.
 
         
Second, I want to write about Yang Hak Seon. He is a Korean artistic gymnist. His family is really poor. While other athletes eat and train well, he wasn't able to eat and train as much as he wanted. Despite all these difficulties, he made a high-difficulty move called 'Hak Seon(spinning three times in the air)'. Only he could succed to spin three times in the air before the landing. I was amazed to see his perfect jump. He got a gold medal in the game. I was quite surprised to see where he lived, too. He lives in a tent with his mom and dad. Yang Hak Seon said he wanted to buy a house for his family.It's really touching to hear him say that. Eventhough,he was poor,he trained hard and got a gold medal.His story is really impressive. 

          The third athelete is Jang Mi-Ran.She is Korean weightlifter. She is a gold medalist in the 2008 Olympic.
She didn't get any medal in this olympic. The reason is the traffic accident. She had a traffic accident last winter and had a serious surgery.The traffic accident's affect on her was terrible. She couldn't lift the weights she had lifted easily before the accident. However, she entered this olympic to leave one more ticket for another Korean athlete to enter the 2016 olympic. Eventhough she had a traffic accident,she attended the olympic for our country, Korea. I will never forget her love to Korea.

           
         In this olympic,there were too much wrong refereeing like the accident of Park Tae-hwan or the odd accident of Shin A-lam.There were lots more unfair refereeing,but our country ranked 5 in the olympic with thriteen gold medals,eight silver medals,and seven bronze medals.I am so proud of all the athletes who had
trained so hard for Korea.This summer was really hot,but I enjoyed the hot weather shouting and cheering for the London Olympic.The 2012 London Olympic was awesome!

 

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홍주형
 12-09-03 19:24
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 12-09-05 23:40
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