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    I went to pension in Chuseak day.(교정본)
    페트라 작성일 : 2013-10-08    조회수 : 2,185     

RAW:

I went to kangwondo with mom and dad.

We stayed at beautful pension.

We made Bulgogi and watched movie.

We also rode cable car.

And we saw mamy sheep so we gave them the foods.

We spent good time.

 
EDIT:

I went to Kangwondo with mom and dad.

We stayed at a beauitful pension house.

We made Bulgogi and watched a movie.

We also rode a cable car.

And we saw many sheep so we gave them food.

We had a good time.




페트라
 13-10-08 17:19
안녕하세요.
페트라아카데미 입니다.

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