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    페트라 작성일 : 2012-08-07    조회수 : 3,124     

My Dream

Name : Young Seo, Lee

Grade : 6th

 

Everyone has a dream and they try to come true their dreams make their dreams come true. The people People who don’t have any dreams might be unhappy. A dream is a wish your heart makes. In dreams you will lose your heartaches whatever you wish for.’  I like these lyrics, which are from OST of Cinderella from the OST of Cinderella.

 

We can have a hope and dream our bright future like these lyrics in this song.

 

I have a dream. My dream has been changed many times. But now I found my real dream. My dream is to be a writer. There are many books in the bookstore. However, there are only a few books that can give readers a deep impression. Books can make people laugh, cry, and be touched. Books can touch people’s lives. It can make us laugh and cry. You might have heard a well-known saying  Books are made by humans, humans are made by books.’   Like the meaning of this saying, reading makes a full man.

 

I don’t think I need to be a famous writer.  Being famous might be good, but not necessarily important.  I think a good writer is a person who can heal people’s hearts and also give them hope. I would like to write a story that gives people dreams and hopes that can inspire people’s dreams and hopes. It can be an essay or a realistic fiction.

 

I have a good habit of writing notes whenever something comes into my head. I think those notes will be very helpful when I write my story in the future. Many experiences and good knowledge will be needed to be a writer. Good knowledge and experiences are needed to be a writer. And also, understanding other people’s lives will be required to be a good writer.

 

Note:  and also is possible if it functions as an adverb but it is redundant if we use  at the start of the sentence.Just use either of them

 

 

When people choose their jobs, the most important thing is that the job has to be what they really like to do. I like to read and write.

So, I will do my best to come true my dream.

 





페트라
 12-08-07 13:17
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