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    Christmas present.
    페트라 작성일 : 2014-01-08    조회수 : 1,723     

I was young.
I liked pink a rabbit doll.
I wish I have a rabbit doll.
And I write a letter to Santa claus.
At christmas morning I saw my big red santa socks.
There was a pink bunny doll!!!
I'm so glad to get a bunny.
Its my best present of christmas.

When I was young, I liked a pink rabbit doll.
I wish to have a pink rabbit doll so I wrote a letter to Santa Claus.
During the Christmas morning, I saw my big red Santa socks.
There was a pink bunny doll.
I'm so glad to get a bunny.
It was the best Christmas present I've had.




페트라
 14-01-09 11:21
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