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    I like pet.(교정본)
    페트라 작성일 : 2013-11-20    조회수 : 2,092     

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I like all about pets.
But I like three kinda of pet.
Thaird I like a dog.
A dog is so nice pet.
Because dogs protect people.
Second.I like snake!because snake's skin is soft and it feels like romantic red.
First.I love rabbit.my grandfather has tow rabbit.and ToTo has a baby now.And I stroke their fur.it it soft and nice!!

 

 

EDIT :

 

I like all pets but I like three kinds of pets.
Third, I like dogs.
A dog is a nice pet because dogs protect people.
Second, I like snakes because a snake's skin is soft and it feels like romantic red.
First, I love rabbits. My grandfather has tow rabbit and ToTo has a baby now. And I stroke their fur.
It is soft and nice!!




페트라
 13-11-20 18:29
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