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    My family (교정본 입니다.)
    페트라 작성일 : 2012-07-06    조회수 : 3,201     

My family.

 

What's does the word 'family' mean?  Family is your friend.  Sometimes kind to you, but sometimes mean to you. But all this is for your own good. You, and your family can share happiness together, and you can share sadness together too. All families are like this. My own family is like this too.

 

First, let me introduce my grandma.

She's an awesome cook! She always makes us delicious meals while my mother and father are at work. She also cleans the house too. She's a very busy woman.

The thing I like about my grandma so much is that she always gives me hope. And she always takes my side whenever I run into a fight with my family.

 

And there's my mom.

She is very very very kind to me, not just to me, but to all people.

When you look into her face, it's always smiling. She's an awesome cook also.

I've always been mean to my mom just because she's kind to me.

And I'm really sorry to her.

 

My dad is like my best friend. I sometimes hate him, but inside I love him more than any one. My dad always thinks of a good game to play with. My dad understands my feelings. I like to play with him. He is good at English, technology, and computers.

 

And there's me. I am age 13 and I'm a girl. I'm good at the computers too.

I guess I got my dad's DNA. I like to sing, draw pictures, ski, ride bikes and swim. But l like shopping the most. I like to buy new clothes and see many things.

 

I really love my family and I love to hang out with them a lot, but they don't have time to enjoy. There busy with their business.

 

Well, that's all about my family including me.  I don't have any brothers or sisters. I really want to have one, but I'm happy with my family just the way it is.

 

-김도현





페트라
 12-07-06 19:12
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