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This Chuseok, I went to my grandma's house.I thought Chuseok was very fun day.
But now, I think Chuseok is very boring day.vert very veryboring day.
My cousin is all older than me. they are too big to play with me.
And I am very big too. So I love hanbok, but I can't have that anymore.
I just do my homework and nothing else.
No play with my sousin, and no hanbok.
It was very boring Chuseok.
EDITED:
This Chuseok, I went to my grandma's house. I thought Chuseok was a very fun day.
But now, I think Chuseok is a very boring day. A very very very boring day.
All my cousins are older than me. They are too big to play with.
And I am very big, too. So I love Hanbok, but I can't wear that anymore.
I just did my homework and nothing else.
No playing with my cousins, and no wearing of Hanbok.
It was a very boring Chuseok.
