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    페트라 작성일 : 2012-08-07    조회수 : 2,842     

My dream

When I was young, I wanted to be a scientist. Cause I really liked to look at the stars. But I realized I didn't really like Science. So now, I want to be a diplomat. If you're a diplomat, you can earn get a lot of money, and you have all the glory... I thought it might be fun.

 

When I graduate from high school, I want to study in one of the best schools in Korea korea. I think I want to study in 'Department of Political Science and Diplomacy'.

I know it’s not easy to enter that school, so I will study very hard when I enter high school I'm in high school. In addition, I will be a wide-reader. I will keep reading newspapers and many books. Oh, it's hard to be a diplomat!

 

I will tell you what a diplomat does. A diplomat is someone who discusses affairs with another country on behalf of her own country. So you can't let the president down. And it's your duty to develop your country. And this is a very big dream. It's like wanting to be a president!! No not that big, but a little close...

Being a diplomat is not just fun.and games. It's really difficult to be one too.

You have to take all kinds of tests and you have to go to a very famous and very

popular school. But You can't just don’t study English all day but you also have to study math, korean and so on.

 

A diplomat receives a lot of money. I want to buy stuffs that I couldn't afford in the past. And I'm going to help poor people with the money I got. I want to be an honest diplomat. And also I'm going to buy a car, a really fancy house, and a private jet and a golf course, and.... There's so much to buy... Anyway, thank you for reading this and I hope you enjoyed it. Thank you.

 Kim do hyun

 

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 12-08-07 13:19
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